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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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One thing that bothers me is the mixture of 3D models (buildings/stuff in background) with the drawn 2D characters in the foreground. It's always difficult to make the two different styles mesh in a harmonic way so maybe if you somehow made the background feel more "drawn" and 2D it would flow a little better and feel less separated.
So yeah, that's it, I hope my suggestions helped you some and good luck with your entry
The only other thing I MIGHT do to it if I were you would be to add some weathering and damage to the walls in the background. It's clear that the far background is utterly ruined, but the midground seems to bealmost new. Some chunks missing and some cracks would really add that extra dimension to it! Also, maybe some destruction on the floor, too.
It's a really solid piece, man! Anya looks totally bad-ass!